you got kind of sloppy with the line work at the end, but the vanishing points got more consistent at the end also. I think your downward parallel lines were your biggest problem although they did get much better at the end.
Thank you for the critique!
yeah I noticed it aswell after I took the photos, that later boxes look sloppier.
I agree with the downward parallel lines especially with the back corners.
I'm glad that my vanshing points got better.
I myself feel that my line weight was very wobbly between boxes either too thin or too thick, with too many times me trying to overcorret lines that felt off and resulting in thicker lines with offshoots.
Glad I could help.
Yeah, I had the same problem with adding line weight to my boxes, many many offshoots.
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