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12:26 PM, Saturday January 15th 2022

Thank you so much for taking the time to critique this :D I apologize for the missing lineweight, I must have forgotten the rule to apply them. I'll make sure to do over the rest of my pages and apply the needed lineweight (soon!). For the diverging lines, I'm still in the process of adjusting my arm control to make my ghosted lines follow my ghosted dot more accurately. But I agree with everything you said and will apply these builds in my future practice!

Here are my works for the requested revision: http://imgur.com/gallery/MLCzfnW

I still faced errors in this revision but I made sure to thoroughly follow the rules in the links you provided.

12:57 PM, Saturday January 15th 2022
edited at 12:58 PM, Jan 15th 2022

Good work on the revisions & yeah there are mistakes but you can keep them(& instructions above) in mind when doing warm ups, boxes can improve a lot over time.

For future lessons & challenges be sure to read the instructions multiple times(may be before every sessions like told in the draw a box workflow) so stuff like missing line weight cannot happen again.

Next Steps:

Congrats! You've completed Box Challenge, now go ahead and start Lesson 2.

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edited at 12:58 PM, Jan 15th 2022
1:39 PM, Saturday January 15th 2022

Understood :D Thank you so much for your time again!

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