3:29 PM, Wednesday January 12th 2022
Hi JI, Hoping you're well.
You probably saw this coming but don't erase/hide your marks. Every mistakes helps you improve even better if you take a note of it.
Your edge extensions are in almost always in right direction & the hatching is done on a front facing face. Mistake happens but they're in the minority.
I had to confirm this with others but I can't find any lineweight done in your boxes, this is one of the important part of the challenge, see https://drawabox.com/lesson/250boxes/1/lineweight section of the challenge.
Sometimes your edges converge in pairs, this can happen if the inner corner come out somewhat off the expected position(see below) or you might have lost the vanishing point. Visualize the angles for convergence of different edges at vanishing point, see this https://imgur.com/8PqQLE0 for better understanding.
If your inner corner is coming out pretty off, then you can try to draw them after doing first two faces of the box, so that you don't miss their convergence, see https://imgur.com/a/DHlA3Jh.
In page with Box 116 & the last page, you lines are diverging instead of converging toward the vanishing point. If you keep the initial corner within the parallel bounds of the adjacent edges of the initial Y, those lines will always be converge. See this https://i.imgur.com/cx2jmv9.png to see what I mean.
Overall you've done good job of drawing the box in 3 point perspective over the course of a year, just a little more push is needed before you move to next part.
Edit:
Add this to the revisions:
- Apply lineweight to 3 of your older pages right now (in others old pages sooner or later) & in all of the new boxes as well.
Next Steps:
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2 boxes with dramatic foreshortening
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4 boxes with shallow foreshortening
Lines should be converging towards the vanishing point all of the times.
Reply with link to the revisions.