11:19 PM, Wednesday September 27th 2023
Hello color
On the normal cylinders you've overall done a good job, main problem i see is that sometimes you're still drawing your ellipses without confidence, like on 136 or 122, keep always in mind that u always have draw them as confidently as you can to get the most out of this exercise.
On the boxes in general you're doing a good job with the initial boxes, but yo have a tendency to ignore the minor axis of the cylinder. The line that goes through the middle of the boxes is going to be the minor axis for the ellipses, so pay attention to it.
Here are some examples on your non confident ellipses and the issue with not alligning them to the minor axis , if you do it this way you'll realize that the issues why you did the ellipses so weirdly is because the box itself was on fault; on the bottom left one you werent drawing a cube (the face on top wasn't a square) so it was impossible to draw a good ellipse that touched all sides.
But if you ignore the correct way of drawing ellipses you won't realize of that issue and you won't be able to improve your boxes, which is why its important to pay attention to it.
Anyways thats about it, good job overall, just keep in mind these 2 things. Make sure you really understand what I mentioned here and move on to lesson 6, good luck!
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Lesson 6