8:06 AM, Thursday October 15th 2020
In general I can agree with the critique from MILKYPOTATO, although:
I can't agree to:
The Funnels, because this: "The minor axis cuts them in half [...]." isn't the case. Often they aren't aligned that well, in your example they are a sometimes off a bit. Watch out for that.
And on the Rotated Boxes they are not rotated "too much", but rather just have not a very good spacing in between the boxes and even are rotated maybe a bit too less.
Organic Perspective here are a few perspective issues but you'll work on them in the 250 Box Challenge.
Next Steps:
250 Box Challenge.
But still keep the exercises from lesson 1 as your 10-15min warmups before your Drawabox sessions. Maybe put there an extra eye out for the Ellipses, they take a lot of practice. ;) And practice to get the Superimposed lines smooth and tidy.
And don't forget about the 50/50 Rule, because otherwise the 250 Box Challenge can get pretty boring ;)
See you there!