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7:23 PM, Monday September 5th 2022

https://imgur.com/a/ZMkEkV5

I know I screwed up on the sausage form facing towards the viewer. That probably made the exercise more complicated than it needed to be. In general I focused on drawing fewer forms and spending more time on each on these pages.

8:43 PM, Monday September 5th 2022

Much better overall, good work.

Remember to overshoot your contour curves so that they hook back into the form as shown here.

Other than that your forms are simpler and your linework is looking tidier, with more mileage you'll continue to improve so I'll be marking your submission complete.

Keep practicing previous exercises in you warm ups and best of luck in lesson 3.

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Move on to lesson 3.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
3:11 AM, Tuesday September 6th 2022

Thank you so much for the response on the holiday. It was not expected. Have a good one!

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