These are definitely marking steps forwards. There's still plenty of room for improvement, but I can see that you're applying the points I raised previously, and that you're adhering more closely to the head construction technique I shared previously. As such, I am going to mark this lesson as complete.

Over the next several months, I'm going to be pushing forward with an overhaul of the videos and lesson material - for the most part that means taking what I'm already sharing with students in my critiques, and formalizing it all into the lesson material which thus far hasn't been able to reflect all that I've learned by giving students their feedback. The head construction approach is a good sign of this.

While I have shared all of these things with you in the feedback you've received thus far, when I actually reach Lesson 5 in my overhaul, I'll be able to present it all in a more cohesive manner. I recommend that at that time, you read over and watch the new material, as it should help further support what I've shared with you already. For now though, just keep practicing this stuff on your own, and continue to reflect on the feedback you've received.