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9:54 PM, Monday June 6th 2022
edited at 9:55 PM, Jun 6th 2022

1. Lines

Superimposed Lines: Good confidence in your lines, but some slight wobble is present.

Ghosted Lines: (Slight) Arching is present.

Ghosted Planes: Almost no arching is present in most of your lines, but some lines do show it.

2. Ellipses

Table of Ellipses: Some ellipses go slightly out of bounds, some ellipses also overlap each other.

Ellipses in Planes: Few ellipses go slightly out of bounds. Good confidence and accuracy.

Funnels: The minor axis splits the ellipses fairly consitently, there are one or two that are lopsided or egg shaped.

3. Boxes

Plotted Perspective: The exercise was completed accurately.

Rough Perspective: Same errors as the lines section(s). Also remember that vertical lines are perpendicular to the horizon, and that the horizontal lines are parallel to the horizon..

Rotated Boxes: Corners are kept close (good)

y-1 the box is barely rotating

y+1 the box doesn't appear to be rotating correctly (https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/d73eea49.jpg)

Organic Perspective: Try to keep the 'Y' above 90 degrees so the boxes don't look too distorted (this appears on some of the boxes). Slight arcing and wobble is also present in a few of your lines.

Next Steps:

Keep doing good warmups, and these issues will go away.

Good Luck On The 250 Boxes.

:D

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edited at 9:55 PM, Jun 6th 2022
6:35 AM, Thursday June 9th 2022

Thank you for your time and helpful feedback!

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