Thanks for your critique, I really appreciate it.
Had a look at the organic intersections video again, and I feel like I got it a bit better this time. Probably rushing too quickly to end the lesson the first time. Added in shadows this time, and I think it looks a lot better.
Form intersections in general kind of went over my head, to be honest.
Had another look at sausages again too, but I think I'll have to add more to my warmups.
Those look much better! For the organic intersections you could still push the shadows a bit more, and try to push smooth the borders of the shadows, they are a bit rough.
Try also to think about how the sausages interact with each other, for example, the one on the left doesn't change at all when it stops being on top of the sausage on it's right.
Noted a few of those things here.
Next Steps:
Alright, so you're making good progress so I'm marking this as complete, great job! Your next step is lesson 3, good luck!
Cool, thank you again.
I'll have to try adjusting the sausage shape in future, I wasn't sure how to go about it without it looking too scuffed.
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