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4:33 AM, Saturday August 21st 2021

hello Elodon,

sorry for the really late reply i really got busy with other stuff. here is the revision you asked of me.

250 box challenge ( Revision) https://imgur.com/gallery/BpmFp6a

it was really hard to find a balance between dramatic boxes and the boxes whose line do not appear parallel. hope i did good. any critics?

3:10 PM, Monday August 23rd 2021

Hello! Good attempt on the boxes!

But All those boxes have convergence super extreme. On shallow perspective boxes the lines should be close to parallel, and the vanishing points should be far away from the page, never in the same page. Here's one example of a shallow perspective box from one of your boxes

Next Steps:

-20 more boxes with shallow perspective

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
6:29 PM, Monday August 23rd 2021
edited at 6:30 PM, Aug 23rd 2021

here. i tried more of these. few mistakes here and there. and if you see double lines then they are not me correcting my mistakes. those came because i was ghosting.

Re. Revision (250 boxes) https://imgur.com/gallery/YLhLIwe

let me know what you think?

Thanks

edited at 6:30 PM, Aug 23rd 2021
3:11 PM, Tuesday August 24th 2021

That's looking better, good job! Try to experiment from now on with more types of boxes as they're a bit too similar, but you're on the right track. Take a look at this diagram to give you some ideas.

That said I think you're ready for lesson 2, good luck and keep up the good work!

Next Steps:

lesson 2

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