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7:04 PM, Thursday May 5th 2022

Hi!

I am doing some critique for you.

Good job finishing the 250 box challenge!

You have much improved through the lesson

Your lines are really smooth and confident. You did the hatching really well. The use of line weight has also often gone well. Try to apply only line-weight on the silhouette of the box.

You have done very well to draw the extension lines, sometimes they are drawn towards you. Try to keep in mind that the extension lines are always going away from the viewer.

you understand well how to draw a box and this has been improved throughout the lesson.

Finally, it is good for next time to practice a little more with extreme foreshortening with the 250 cylinder challenge.

You did a really good job!

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You can move on to lesson 2 , Goodluck!

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3:36 PM, Monday May 9th 2022

Thank you very much for the critique!

4:21 PM, Monday May 9th 2022

Np, goodluck with your next lesson! :)

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