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4:45 PM, Monday February 27th 2023

Here are my revisions https://imgur.com/a/CKCeM2A

8:15 AM, Tuesday February 28th 2023

Well, it's okay but some of your lines are parallel or diverging here is something that can help you : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mteUPdCHn4s&t=

Moreover you have many things that may help you on the discord server in basic-challenges pinned messages.

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I want you to do 5 more box.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
7:19 PM, Thursday March 16th 2023

https://imgur.com/a/q0Wr3oW

I think that I will add some boxes to my warmup routine to help make me more patient when constructing them.

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These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.

Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).

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