5:01 PM, Friday May 29th 2020
Hi, akshay_karanje.
Good job on finishing this lesson. Overall this is a very good submission.
Your superimposed lines are very good and well packed together. On some of your ghosted lines, I can notice some slight arching in them. Be sure to draw your lines with a shoulder motion. If you mix some elbow motion, your lines will definitely have a tendency to arch.
Your ghosted planes are very good, but you didn't plot your lines in every occasion, specially on the inner lines. Always plan your lines with dots, as this gives you a goal to draw to. Also, by checking how far away your lines are from the dots, you can easily identify your mistakes, which will help you improve.
Your ellipses are also good, and you did draw through them, but, more specifically on the ellipses in planes, I feel you went through them one time too many. Draw each ellipse 2 or 3 times at most.
Moving on to your boxes. You rough perspective is also very good and everything is well aligned with the horizon. Although not very noticeable, some of your lines are slightly wobbly. I feel this happened because you might have drawn them at a slower pace, in order to make sure they would each their destination. I'm certainly nitpicking here, because it's visible your lines are very well done.
Your rotated boxes are very clean and you did well keeping them packed together. I feel you could have pushed the rotation a bit further on the "corner" boxes, but, overall, you did a very good job here.
Now, your organic perspective is where I feel you struggled the most. Although the compositions are nice, you could have exaggerated the difference between the smaller and larges boxes, in order to better sell the illusion of depth. You could also have overlapped some more boxes and increased the line weight of the overlapping lines, to highlight which box is in front. Your line work here could also have been better, specially after seeing from your ghosted planes that you're able to draw straighter lines. At this stage it's more important to focus on getting smooth and confident lines, as accuracy with later come, if you keep practicing correctly. You did a good job making it seem that the boxes belong to the same 3D space, although some of the boxes perspective could have been better. This is not too worrisome here, because you'll have time to practice perspective during the next steps.
As I said before, your work here is overall very good. Don't forget to warm up with some of these exercises and good luck for the boxes challenge.
Next Steps:
250 boxes challenge.