8:32 PM, Saturday July 18th 2020
Can't quite make out if you're working in pencil or pen? Anywho, your ellipses in funnels are a little too loose and not equally bisected by the minor axis. I recommend re-reading that homework explanation and the examples of what to do vs what not to do. Also, I really recommend in future using a ruler for your minor bisecting line, and a coffee lid or some other large round shaped object for the funnel so you have a nice symmetrical area to work in and can be a better judge of whether or not you're making symmetrical ellipses.
Your ghosted lines arch and wobble a little bit, which indicates you're not fully committing to using your shoulder and a smooth trajectory.
Your super imposed lines appear to start a little off the mark so really focus on hitting that initial dot at the start of every new line. It looks like on some of your lines you flick off at the top, try and be conscious of that and work on your follow through being straight as you lift your pen off the paper at the end of your line.
It looks like you have a good sense of space with your organic boxes and how they turn in space, but you've strayed away from prioritizing confidence in your lines and resorted to wobbly lines for the sake of accuracy. Remember, confidence first, accuracy comes later through repetition and lots of ghosting.
Your rotated boxes appear to be a bit all over the place, with some boxes popping out way over the top of others, but your lines look a bit more confident here. All of the lines in this exercise are essentially supposed to be parallel to each other but some of your boxes don't line up with each other.
Your ellipses in planes look fairly confident but it looks like you're looping around more than the recommended two to three times suggested. Also you're out of the edges on most of the planes.
Your plotted perspective looks pretty on point except for that second row on the first page with that first box on the left. That back wall of said box appears way out of perspective.
Your rough perspective boxes are way off from the vanishing point, which is fine, but hopefully you got more of a grasp of just how dramatic the angles need to be to hit the correct vanishing points or come close since none of us are perfect. Again with the boxes the confidence seems lacking on some of the lines.
Your table of ellipses look pretty good other than looping a few times too many and coming out of bounds/not touching the bounds, but they look better than the ellipses from the previous assignments so good job on the improvement!
All in all you're coming along just fine, just really take to heart striving to improve on all of the points mentioned, and maybe re-read through some of the sections just to further cement what the lessons are trying to drive home. Other than that, keep on trucking and push on with the next lesson!