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11:07 PM, Friday May 27th 2022

Hi! I took a glance over your work and I have some feedback to offer you to hopefully better your draftmenship:

  • For the ghosting method practice( the one where you draw two dots and then a line), you should vary the distance between dots in order to create far longer lines. It can help getting used to different and varying lengths of lines and potential application later down the road.

  • For the ellipses portion, specifically the homework where you have to draw ellipses within a frame split into 10 or so smaller frames, try to make the ellipses touch one another and become bigger in size. One way I did this was by drawing the next ellipses on the same circle, even if I began to overlap a little with the other ellipse. Also try to maintain a consistent size throughout each frame to better help with your brushwork and consistency.

  • Lastly, for the rotating boxes I just wanted to point out that having lighter strokes inside the boxes can help in showing how the boxes relate to the vanishing point.

8:51 PM, Tuesday May 31st 2022

Good evening Lublu,

I just come to suggest you that I understand your willing to help but to not give any comment on someone else lesson unless you're has already been criticized.

Don't take it as a critic, it's just a reminder from the Drawabox rules.

Have a good journey :)

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