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2:33 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

-So from what i see your lines are a little arched not wobbly.

-In the exercise where you had to draw ellipises in the planes i saw quite a lot of ellipses not touching all four sides of the quadrilateral so this is a mistake too.

-In the funnel exercise your ellipses are all the same height the exercise meant you to have variation between their width and height

-in rough perspective the boxes should be parallel to the horizon line also your lines were quite wobbly, did you use the ghosting method with dots placed first if not that is a mistake.

-no comment on the last two exercises of the lesson cause i am not qualified enough(as i suck at them too)

Next Steps:

Maybe correct the midtakes or identify them and try again if you see an improvment you are good to go.

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12:21 PM, Tuesday July 5th 2022

I understand! Thank you very much for your critique!

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