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5:10 PM, Saturday July 2nd 2022
Hey
- overall I think you understood the purpose of the exercises and preformed accordingly.
-mostly confident smooth lines but not always , this will improve with warm-ups eventually, as long as you use your shoulder and be as confident as possible.
- boxes are a little bit random in orientation , the 250 boxes challenge will help with that.
i also need some critics on my assignments to move to the challenge, please help me with that.
Next Steps:
250 boxes challenge
2:40 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022
Sure if you send me the link i can hp.
12:20 PM, Tuesday July 5th 2022
Thank you very much for taking the time to critique my work!
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2:33 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022
-So from what i see your lines are a little arched not wobbly.
-In the exercise where you had to draw ellipises in the planes i saw quite a lot of ellipses not touching all four sides of the quadrilateral so this is a mistake too.
-In the funnel exercise your ellipses are all the same height the exercise meant you to have variation between their width and height
-in rough perspective the boxes should be parallel to the horizon line also your lines were quite wobbly, did you use the ghosting method with dots placed first if not that is a mistake.
-no comment on the last two exercises of the lesson cause i am not qualified enough(as i suck at them too)
Next Steps:
Maybe correct the midtakes or identify them and try again if you see an improvment you are good to go.
12:21 PM, Tuesday July 5th 2022
I understand! Thank you very much for your critique!
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