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9:41 PM, Friday July 22nd 2022

I appreciate you giving me such insightful feedback. I'll keep it in mind as I go forward.

I apologize for taking so long to do this as I didn't check the Drawabox website after I began the 250 box challenge.

Here are the revisions: https://imgur.com/gallery/6Bf2tSg

9:36 PM, Monday July 25th 2022
edited at 9:47 PM, Jul 25th 2022
  1. Superimposed Lines:

Much cleaner, straighter lines now. Great job!

  1. Tables of ellipses:

These are definitely neater. There is still room for improvement with the consistency of the ellipse angles, so be sure to spent some extra time during your warm-ups with this exercise.

  1. Organic Perspective:

Your boxes demonstrate a good sense of 3d space.

I see a few doubled up lines. I know it's tempting to try and fix a line that went wrong, but make sure to draw each line only once even if it went askew.

Your revisions show a lot of improvement, so I'm going to mark this as complete now.

Next Steps:

The next step will be the 250 Box Challenge. Good luck and keep up the good work!

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
edited at 9:47 PM, Jul 25th 2022
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