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3:35 PM, Thursday October 28th 2021

Thank you very much for the detailed feedback and for taking the time to show me corrected versions in addition to explaining them. I agree with your feedback, especially your suggestion about the distance between the parallel sections of ribbons, which I was unaware I was doing but can see now where they need work.

2:14 PM, Friday October 29th 2021
edited at 2:14 PM, Oct 29th 2021

Hi BowtieBuck,

You are welcome! It would be great if you could share the image of your revisions (one page of arrows) so that I could mark this lesson as complete for you!

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One page of Arrows

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edited at 2:14 PM, Oct 29th 2021
2:52 PM, Friday October 29th 2021

https://www.reddit.com/user/BowtieBuck/comments/qiehbc/arrow_revisions/

This page only has four arrows (two of which get cut off in the end) but I tried to squish the 'further' sections together and to start with a smaller width in the distance.

Please let me know if I have misunderstood or you would like me to retry.

Thank you.

2:09 PM, Sunday October 31st 2021

Hey BowtieBuck!

This looks much better! You have followed all of your instructions! Congratulations of on completing lesson 2. Good luck for the rest of your journey!

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move on to lesson 3

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