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11:02 PM, Tuesday April 19th 2022

Oh, I understand everything you say.

The lineweight thing is understandable; my camera doesn't pick it up very well either.

So take it lighter on that part.

Oh, if you need more info about the convergence angle you can help here:

https://imgur.com/8PqQLE0

I hope you manage to correct those details in your 20 boxes!

Don't worry too much about how long it takes, I'll be here to help you whenever I can.

3:45 PM, Saturday April 23rd 2022

Hey!

I have just completed the last of the 20 boxes, Here is the result: https://imgur.com/a/tQdduon

I tired to focus on the points in your critique:

I applied the lineweight correctly this time (on discord someone told my that I also put it on the front edge, which is wrong. It only belongs on the silhouette.) So I hope it is better now.

I tried to focus on boxes with very light convergences and tried to avoid arching (the arching part is still there at some longer lines, but I think it got a little better).

I hope I followed your critique correctly and improved at least a bit :D

Thank you again for helping me out!

8:10 PM, Saturday April 23rd 2022
edited at 8:12 PM, Apr 23rd 2022

Hello!

How nice that you have completed the task.

Congratulations, you will notice yourself that there is a great improvement compared to the previous boxes.

All the points I mentioned seem to have been largely corrected.

I will mark your assignment as complete, continue when you get a chance!

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edited at 8:12 PM, Apr 23rd 2022
8:17 PM, Saturday April 23rd 2022

Thank you again for your help! Helps and means a lot!

Textures (and other fun stuff that is mostly not boxes) here I come!

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