Hey, and congrats on finishing this challenge~ I’ll be looking through it, and hopefully giving you some tips that’ll help you take your boxes to the next level.

The first thing I notice is that your lines are still a little wobbly. You’ll remember from lesson 1 that it’s more important for our lines to be confident, than it is for them to be accurate. This is, of course, something that applies to future lessons, too. Be careful, also, that you’re not correcting an incorrect line. This also means that you shouldn’t extend a line that stops short. Simply spend some more time on the next one. Moving on to the actual point of this challenge, the boxes, one thing I notice is that your lines don’t always converge towards their respective vanishing points- sometimes they’ll diverge (i.e. head away from it, rather than towards it.) This is, of course, incorrect. It’s easy to get this wrong when dealing with shallow foreshortening, so a good way to practice it is to try some dramatically foreshortened boxes. Finally, the inner angles of your boxes are a little similar, so there’s not a lot of variety to the boxes themselves.