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2:05 PM, Monday June 29th 2020

If you’d be so kind as to take some higher quality pictures of these, I’ll be glad to take a look at them. As it stands, this is really difficult to judge.

3:34 AM, Tuesday July 7th 2020

sorry about that

https://imgur.com/a/vJoIBZT

here you go this should be much higher quality

4:15 AM, Sunday July 12th 2020

Hi! So, I’ve got good news and bad news. The good news is that your line quality has improved, and the automatic reinforcing issue has been fixed. The bad news is that the convergences are still a little off. In your first page, for example, the one labeled ‘dramatic’, there’s a lot of parallel lines, and quite a lot of diverging ones, too. To fix this, let’s take things a little slower.

Next Steps:

I’d like to see one more page of boxes. The foreshortening should be dramatic, and this time, I’d like you to plot and label each vanishing point (so, place a dot, label it vp1/2/3.) Then, as per usual, ghost towards them, and build your box. Once that’s taken care of, we’ll move on to the next step.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
3:28 PM, Monday July 13th 2020
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