Your organic intersections are definitely improved, although I have reservations about your organic forms with contour lines. Add to that the fact that you submitted your revisions in under 24 hours - while that doesn't necessarily mean anything bad on its own, it does often make me suspicious that a student may not be spending as much time as they could on each page, hammering to get everything done in a single session.

Your results there still show similar issues with accuracy and control of your contour lines. If you're perhaps uncertain of how much you should be pacing yourself when approaching this exercise, take a look at this video from ScyllaStew.

You can see there that she has some accuracy issues here and there too, so I'm not at all expecting perfect work, try and match the sort of patient, purposeful pacing with which she works through each individual mark.

Before I mark this lesson as complete, I'd like you to do just one more organic form with contour ellipses, and one more with contour curves. That's a total of just two sausage forms, so make sure you take as much time as you need to draw each mark as well as you can.