2:38 AM, Wednesday March 9th 2022
hey dobe2180! i'm koyomi and i'm going to review your lesson 1 submission.
1.lines
your superimposed lines don't look straight enough,did you draw with your wrist ??? try using your shoulder and if it's still difficult why don't u put 2 dots with a ruler as horizontal line and then connect them just like you draw super imposed lines this will give u sense of straightness when drawing
2.elipses
your elipses still look messy and i think if you wanna make a good elipses use your shoulder and do ghosting technique to draw elipses it's quite similar to how we draw straight linesbo
3.boxes
your rotated boxes problem is they don't look rotated so i will tell u the key, it is find the vanishing points using your neighbouring edges,the vanishing points are located along the horizontal line,the more rotated the box the more vansihing points are getting closer to each other along the horizontal line
Next Steps:
1 super imposed lines
1 ghosting lines
1 elipses
1 rotated boxes