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2:38 AM, Wednesday March 9th 2022

hey dobe2180! i'm koyomi and i'm going to review your lesson 1 submission.

1.lines

your superimposed lines don't look straight enough,did you draw with your wrist ??? try using your shoulder and if it's still difficult why don't u put 2 dots with a ruler as horizontal line and then connect them just like you draw super imposed lines this will give u sense of straightness when drawing

2.elipses

 your elipses still look messy and i think if you wanna make a good elipses use your shoulder and do ghosting technique to draw elipses it's quite similar to how we draw straight linesbo

3.boxes

 your rotated boxes problem is they don't look rotated so i will tell u the key, it is find the vanishing points using your neighbouring edges,the vanishing points are located along the horizontal line,the more rotated the box the more vansihing points are getting closer to each other along the horizontal line

Next Steps:

1 super imposed lines

1 ghosting lines

1 elipses

1 rotated boxes

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
11:23 PM, Wednesday March 9th 2022

revisions of lesson 1

https://imgur.com/a/GWdc96w

2:34 PM, Thursday March 10th 2022

allright afer seeing your lines it looks like you take time to stoke it and your elipses look better and for your rotated boxes they look okay but it's okay it's a tough lesson and i think it's time for you to move to 250 boxes exercise

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