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12:19 PM, Tuesday February 23rd 2021

Arrows: you got the concept yet your lines are too sketchy & wobbly do try drawing from shoulder and drawing lines in one smooth motion (if too scary ghost a lot first)

Contour curves: once again sketchy lines

Contour ellipses: sketchy lines, also all ellipses have same degree, try varying them as the form turns

Textures: OK

Form intersections: sketchy/wobbly lines

Organic intersections: sketchy/wobbly lines

Overall you did quite well: you understood the concepts taught in this lesson, yet your line quality is very bad, I suggest setting aside some time to focus on line quality daily & keep reminding yourself to draw from shoulder without going over lines

Next Steps:

Improve line quality and move on to next lesson

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3:05 AM, Wednesday February 24th 2021

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