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5:50 PM, Friday October 27th 2023

Hi!Thank you so much for an in depth critique.Here is the feedback homework: https://imgur.com/a/ViNvoKT. Two pages of each.I mainly tried to focus on not repeating lines.For Organic Perspective" exercise i tried to apply things you critiqued tho i still had little bit of struggle with that one.

8:54 PM, Friday October 27th 2023

Thanks for the revisions!

"Ellipses in planes" look a lot smoother

The "Rough perspective" looks better, and also smoother

In the "Organic perspective" the boxes are rotating more, and they're also seem to be more confident

Also I think repeating lines is fine if you're trying to add line weight, BUT it's not required for Lesson 1.

Congrats on completing Lesson 1, and Good Luck with the rest of Drawabox!!

I'll mark the lesson as complete

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8:54 AM, Saturday October 28th 2023

Great,thanks!

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