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10:31 AM, Tuesday October 27th 2020
edited at 10:38 AM, Oct 27th 2020

Thank you very much for your critique! I'll keep all of it in mind and apply it in my regular warmups! As for the revision, I see it clearer where I messed up my foreshortening. I tried my best to balance my foreshortening (not too dramatic), but i ended up messing it by having the lines not intersect at all..

Heres the another page you requested! https://imgur.com/a/8T4c8dI

Again, thank you very much!

edited at 10:38 AM, Oct 27th 2020
2:57 PM, Thursday October 29th 2020

That extra page looked great!

I could really see the perspective and the foreshortening was realistic.

You can definitely move on to the 250 box challenge, good luck with it!

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