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11:20 PM, Thursday November 17th 2022

Nicely done on all of these. I think you did fine on the number of contour lines and ellipses per sausage. Just keep in mind that as you continue to practice, you may find yourself using less contour lines or ellipses to enforce 3D forms.

As for the organic intersections, it looks very good. I can tell that you focused on how the shadows fall of each other. There are a few that still need a little work. The one on the bottom left has its shadow more attached to it when it should be more on the floor. And the middle one also could use a cast shadow on the floor.

All that being said, great improvement. I'm fine passing you for this lesson. Keep on practicing these in warm ups.

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1:35 PM, Sunday November 27th 2022

Thank you so much for the feedback!

8:11 PM, Sunday November 27th 2022

Of course!

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