Hi,

First of all I would like to thank you for your critique :D

For the arrows, I did some of hatching on non overlapping part because I thought I would convey the non overlapping part as some sort of cliff, where the side would be higher. Thanks for the feedback and I'll keep that in mind on Part 3.

Like you said, I think the one thing I really needs to practice is the cast shadow. I was surprised that you liked the texture analysis, even though I thought I'm gonna fail that one haha. I'm agree with your feedback regarding the fur texture. I'll try to practice about it in the future! Sometime your brain just overgeneralize the tuft and then I ended up following it.

I'll try to warm up by doing more shallow foreshortertning. I kept getting afraid that if I don't have an extreme angle, it might not be good enough or that I wouldn't learn that much. But now I understand :D

I took your advise on the organic intersection by doing the sausage first followed by the shadow. It helped me a lot and I believe reduced the amount of error I made on the revision. So thank you! Also I realised in some of the revision that some of my sausage wasn't that confident, sorry about that!

I have reduced the amount of contours for the organic form, though I made around 5 contours/ellipses per sausage. I thought the small sausage would be fine? But if you think I should do another revision for it, please just ask! It's partly because I thought the example had around the same contours and well, I accidently misread your feedback after I finished making the revision.

Most of the time, I am conflicted whether to add too much detail or too little. I think that's my problem in general, putting it too much detail because I'm afraid of well, blank detail that our brains can fill in.

https://imgur.com/a/EoN6Dgc