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8:06 PM, Thursday August 27th 2020
edited at 2:10 PM, Aug 29th 2020

Hi!

Your lines look pretty confident and smooth. The elipses look also nice and confident. Some of them aren’t kept in the bounds. I would suggest you add exercises like funnels or ghosted planes to your warm-up. In the rough perspective exercise you have some mistakes witch perspective, but you should not worry about this as you will train perspective in the 250 box challenge.

In the rotated boxes exercise I noticed that your boxes aren’t really rotating. Here's what I mean:

https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/d73eea49.jpg

Ps: I don't know what happend in the next steps section. I meant that you should do the rotated boxes exercise again.

Next Steps:

You would recommend that you do the rotated boxes exercise again. But overall good job!

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
edited at 2:10 PM, Aug 29th 2020
5:10 PM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

Thank you so much! Noticed that in the rotated boxes something was off, will do it again. Thanks again.

7:29 PM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

Glad I could help you! I'll be waiting for it.

10:57 PM, Monday September 7th 2020

Hi again! Can you see if there's any gigantic error in my 2nd try on those rotated boxes? Link here.

I also included two more pages of some lines that was recommended by Lars (Thank you again too), if you could take a look it would be very helpful.

Thanks again.

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