Hey, Pestilence. Good job on finishing this lesson.

Just took a look at your work and here's what I have to say.

Your superimposed lines are good, but there are somewhat wobbly. Remember to draw them in a swift motion. Don't try to focus too much on the lines during the drawing moment.

Your ghosted lines and planes are much better in this aspect.

On your table of ellipses exercise, although the ellipses are drawn smoothly, they could have definitely been better packed together. On the planes in ellipses some of them are kind of floating. Remember that each ellipse should touch all four edges of the planes.

Moving to your boxes exercise, your rough perspective boxes are mostly aligned (except in a few cases, specially the back plane) with the horizon and the perspective is decent. You did, however, forget to draw the boxes completely. You should draw the inner lines as well.

On your rotated boxes, some of them are rotating, but if you kept everything closer together as in the example homework, you could have achieved a better end result.

Your organic perspective is good, but you could have draw more boxes in each composition and expressed a smooth transition from the smaller to the larger boxes. Some don't have a correct perspective, but you will have time to work on that during the boxes challenge. You could have also overlapped more boxes and increased the line weight of the overlapping lines, in order to highlight they are in front.

Overall you did well in this lesson, but there are a few aspects you need to get better.

It seems that you still have some "course correction" holding youur progress a back a little, but it's expected from a beginner. After all, your ghosted lines show less wobbling than your imposing lines. Good effort on ellipses - they are confident and I see you're trying to stay in the bounds, but the shape of your ellipses needs some training as well as how they touch the corners - make sure to do them as warmups later. Most of your ellipses in planes don't touch all the four corners - you'll need to work on that, I suggest doing one more page of them. You have a problem with funnels - they aren't aligned to the minor axis. I suggest re-reading about it in the exercise and giving one more page of funnels a shot. Good job keeping them snuggly though! Rough perspective looks fine but you sometimes struggle to keep your horizontal lines aligned - keep an eye on it.

Hi Pestilence,

You have really solid work on the superimposed lines. They maintain a strong trajectory and show confidence. A couple lines fray at the end, but it's okay for this lesson.

Your ghosted lines are pretty good as well. There are not a lot of under or overshoots. Just make sure to keep an eye out for when you are ghosting your lines and putting that pen on paper. :)

Regarding your table of ellipses, most of the time they fit into the table, but some of them end up not touching the sides. When you are drawing ellipses, you can also ghost them before you put the pen down. This applies for the funnels page, where your ellipses mostly fit in-between the arc lines, but they don't touch each other as much.

For your ghosted planes, they are also very solid. The ellipses in planes come out with strength and confidence. Keep in mind you are also trying to have the ellipses touch all four sides of the ghosted planes.

Your plotted and rough perspective needs to have the form drawn through. Sometimes we believe we know what we need to do, but these are one of the few times when we should re-read instructions carefully. You can read starting from this section for plotted, and this for rough perspective. The red lines seems to be draws past the horizontal line, which Uncomfortable states to draw them up to that point, and not towards the vanishing point. .

Rotated boxes are close and compact enough to see the overall figure. There is a common issue where the boxes are not rotating. . This homework is pretty difficult, so I will say it's alright for now.

For your organic perspective homework, there is quite a bit of space between the boxes you draw. Some of them are moving away from the viewer, while others have subtle movement, such as this homework here on the far right where it does not seem to rotate away from the viewer at first, but eventually does. Just make sure when you are creating 3D space, add more boxes so that viewers do not have to do guesswork.