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5:48 PM, Thursday May 6th 2021

Hello,

your lines are good, they are confident and straight. Also your ghosted planes look right :)

In your plotted perspective you have used only one vanishing point but if I am not mistaken there should be two vanishing points. So you could do that one again.

your ellipses look good as well but you could also give the funnels another try and try to make the ellipses more symmetrical.

Kind regards,

Cristina

Next Steps:

Plotted perspectice excersice.

Funnels.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
8:19 AM, Saturday May 8th 2021

Not expected to get another critique this fast. Thank you for give me some critique.

I think, the hardest part of the first lesson's homework are the ellipses section. More over for The Funnels and The Table of Ellipses. For funnel, it hard to plan the shape so, my ellipses often get wobbly. Meanwhile the Table of Ellipses, I don't know what I aimed when drawing those ellipses though they're already mentioned in the instructions.

Here my revisions:

https://imgur.com/a/iThR4k4

I don't have any issues for the plotted perspective. But for the Funnels, as I mentioned before, some of them still wobbly. I tried another shot on the funnel variation but it ended failure.

Anyways, thanks again for your critique. If there something else that I could fix, don't hesitate to tell me!

5:36 PM, Monday May 10th 2021

I think this looks great :) The ellipses look more symmerical. But I agree, I have the same issue with wobbliness when soung ellipses, even straight lines. They are difficult.

So I guess this means you can go ahead and do the 250 boxes challange :)

Next Steps:

You can go ahead to the 250 boxes challenge or lesson nr 2

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9:08 PM, Monday May 10th 2021

Okay thank to you.

Hope you doing well too on 250 Box Challenge!

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