7:01 PM, Thursday December 9th 2021
It may have taken a long time, but your work on these new revisions is fantastic, and you're doing a great job of demonstrating that you now understand the feedback I provided, and have been able to apply it effectively.
There's no need to redo anything - remember that what I'm looking for above all else is understanding, and you're showing that and more.
The only point I want to call out is a fairly minor one - when drawing your animals' eye sockets, you're clearly trying to stick close to what the informal head construction demo shows, but you do deviate a little. Make sure you match the shape shown here as closely as you can - drawing a pentagon with the point turned downwards. With both eye sockets together, this provides a nice wedge in which the muzzle can fit, making everything feel nice and grounded. Pentagons have 5 sides to them - your eye sockets here are hexagons, so they end up with 6.
Anyway, great work - I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.
Next Steps:
Feel free to move onto the 250 cylinder challenge, which is a prerequisite for lesson 6.