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7:49 PM, Sunday June 21st 2020

This is a very good improvement!

Your planes are better constructed with your lines looking much more confident overall than before. There is still some hesitation in your ellipses but it is less than before. I recommend that you continue to incorporate this exercise into your warm ups so that you can continue to improve.

Other than that you are free to move onto the 250 Box Challenge.

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Continue to the 250 Box Challenge!

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9:16 PM, Sunday June 21st 2020

Thank you for guiding me with this, I'm looking forward to starting on the boxes challenge tomorrow!

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Staedtler Pigment Liners

Staedtler Pigment Liners

These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.

Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).

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