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2:42 PM, Saturday June 20th 2020

Hello,

Thank you for taking the time to look over my work, I appreciate your feedback.

I have uploaded a page of the Elipses in planes assignment to Imgur -

https://imgur.com/tY78x8t

Thank you!

  • Tom
7:49 PM, Sunday June 21st 2020

This is a very good improvement!

Your planes are better constructed with your lines looking much more confident overall than before. There is still some hesitation in your ellipses but it is less than before. I recommend that you continue to incorporate this exercise into your warm ups so that you can continue to improve.

Other than that you are free to move onto the 250 Box Challenge.

Next Steps:

Continue to the 250 Box Challenge!

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
9:16 PM, Sunday June 21st 2020

Thank you for guiding me with this, I'm looking forward to starting on the boxes challenge tomorrow!

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