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4:09 PM, Monday May 3rd 2021

As a whole, this is looking much better, and it has been applied quite effectively to your plant constructions. I noticed just one issue - periodically you'll slip back into old habits in regards to the branches technique. For example, as shown here, you're only allowing for a minimal overlap between the segments. As shown in the instructions, you are supposed to be starting a given segment back at the previous ellipse.

Anyway, all in all, this is considerable progress. I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

Next Steps:

Move onto lesson 4.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
5:38 PM, Thursday May 6th 2021

Thanks a lot. Appreciate the time.

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