11:39 AM, Monday February 14th 2022
Hello.
Looks like you’ve hatched the correct face on all of these, good job.
But you’ve only extended half your lines and I have to ask, WHY?
It is unlikely to be a misunderstanding, as you extended them all correctly on your first page, and unlikely to be a lapse in concentration or forgetfulness (which would cause one or two random missing extensions, not exactly half the set.) So, why did you choose to only extend two lines from each set? I’m curious to your reasoning for that. All 4 lines should converge together to a single point, so by only extending 2 of them you’re missing some crucial information that you can take to inform your future boxes and improve your work.
You’re still drawing most of your lines mostly parallel. There’s a bit of convergence on the blue lines on 9 and 10, but not as much as I might hope or expect, given the feedback I wrote for your previous page. At the moment all your boxes either have very shallow foreshortening or none at all (which is a form of isometric drawing and considered a mistake in this challenge) You can check Comfy’s explanation on foreshortening here https://drawabox.com/lesson/250boxes/1/foreshortening and here’s an example of boxes with a variety of foreshortening https://i.imgur.com/1RupC9J.jpg see how all sets of lines converge, and for the more dramatic foreshortening they converge to a point on the page?
My last point has nothing to do with drawing and is rather blunt. Manners cost nothing. Even if you’re a child, even if English isn’t your first language, I’m sure you know how to say please and thank you. I have now spent over two hours and written over 2k words trying to help you and at no point have you acknowledged that anything I have said has been helpful or worthwhile to you. Hopefully you’re getting help on the Discord (I haven’t checked on it as I’m logged out for a week for mental health reasons) Fair warning- if you send me another image without context I’m just going to ignore you, because I believe my time and energy would be better spent helping other students who appreciate my efforts. Good luck.