kirui686

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kirui686's Sketchbook

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    6:39 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

    You are doing a great job overall! However, there are some mistakes to be improved:

    -Some of your lines are arching. Make sure you're drawing from your shoulder.

    -Some of your lines are scratchy. Remember that don't repeat the line again if you missed it, just leave it there.

    -The gaps weren't kept together in rotated boxes. You should keep the gaps narrow and consistent to infer space information from adjacent boxes.

    -Boxes weren't rotating int rotated boxes. The second and third box on the axis have nearly the same convergence. Remember that as boxes rotates, its convergence will become greater.

    -Parallel lines should converge to vanishing point in the organic perspective part. Most of your line diverges, thus the form doesn't look like a box.

    Next Steps:

    Move on to the 250 box challenge. You will be better at boxes as you work through this challenge.

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    3 users agree
    5:45 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

    I think you did a great job on knowing how to do these exercises!

    However, there are still some mistakes that can be improved:

    • Some of your lines are wobbly

      Make sure that you draw with confident, from your shoulder.

      It is fine that the lines are not very accurate. Accuracy will improve as you practice more.

    • Don't repeat lines

      If you undershoot a line or miss the dot you're aiming for, just leave it there.

      Don't repeat it or concatenate from the end.

    And yes, you can move on to the 250 box challenge.

    Next Steps:

    Do the 250 box challenge.

    This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 3 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
    5:03 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

    Thanks for the critique!

    5:01 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

    Thanks for the critique!

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