Farhanthenerd

ohh it was paid? I didn't realize. I was looking at some challenge submissions because i was overwhelmed and honestly lost while doing this challenge. I didn't really know where to focus but looking at some submissions at specifically this critique really helped me. so, if l dld something inapropriate I would like to apologize to you and the student. I am deeply sorry.

but seriously though this critique really helped but now I know I mooched of this student and feel very guilty damn it. textures don't make any sense on paper quite literally.

shouldn't the light rays angle get bigger as they go to the left? I don't think I understand this.

thank you for your very in depth critique

I always seem to struggle with what my process is and thinking in genaral I'll keep those things in mind

waiting for over a month for a critique has been a nuisance so I may have started lesson 6 a week ago

but other than that l'm very thankful for your critique your guidance really helped me during the lesson 5 submissions a well . so, see you in a month I guess

nothing much to say just keep doing these for your warmups. and i'll see you in the 250 cylinders challenge

your constructions look really nice and solid nothing much to say. just keep doing this for your warmups

contructions look solid.

but you don't draw thought your forms you don't use the sausage method for constuction and you don't draw a shadow to indicate the ground plane not taking advantedge of 3d space.

your contructions look solid but you don't draw through your forms and you don't draw a shadow to signify the ground shadow. and not using the sausage construction method for your leg constuction.

first off i really admire your ambition into the hw. but you have a bit more work to go. first i'd recomend you get better quality paper. it was clrealy shooddy and i'd say get yourself a nice stack of printer paper and also put some paper underneath your drawing paper

other than that your sausage forms lack variety.

so more observation and deliberation is needed

Let's start your contructions are clean your constructions look solid. So nice work.

nice work on the sausages.

overall not much to say. just keep doing these lessons as warmups and don't worry if you fail a lot

depends did you take a iong break before starting this lesson?? And if you have been doing your warmups I don't think you need to