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thanks for the suggestion!

Hey there! I'm a still a beginner, so my feedback can be limited.

• Superimposed lines:

In the first page, there is a bit of fraying at the starting end of the line, you should carefully place the tip of the pen at the starting point, ghost, and then execute your lines. In the second page, it looks like it has gotten better, nice.

• Ghosted lines:

Awesome, the lines look really crisp, but there's a bit of wobbling, it's good to see that you prioritize line confidence over accuracy, accuracy and wobbling will get better with warm ups. Try to lift your pen up right before your line reaches the end point to prevent overshooting.

• Ghosted planes:

A lot of the lines look better in section, one thing that stood out was that you drew the ellipse only once, it should be drawn over 2-3 times.

• Funnels:

Great, sometimes the ellipses are not aligning to the minor axis, but again, it'll reduce with warm ups.

• Table of ellipses:

Awesome, your ellipses fit snugly within the boundaries, and they're drawn over at least 2 times. I did notice that some of your ellipse degrees aren't consistent with the others (they're not the same). They should be of equal degrees.

• Plotted perspective

Good, the boxes look solid and are within the safe zone (cone of vision)

• Rough perspective

Some of your lines are not parallel to the horizon line, but in general it's good :)

• Rotated boxes:

Great! However, i noticed that one of your boxes at the point where it turns (top left) seems out of place.

• Organic perspective:

A fair bit of the boxes look too similar in size, it's hard to tell which box is closer to the viewer, try making the boxes closer to the viewer larger and the ones further smaller.