9:35 AM, Friday February 19th 2021
Thanks for the great and specific feedback!
I totally missed drawing through in organic intersections :sweats:
Organic Arrows being one of the first exercises in Lesson 3, I will work on more foreshortening there (and in my warm-ups).
Looking again at my bark texture, yes, I felt at the time that I was doing well on the macro shapes, but it's true that on the smaller, hairy shapes I fell into lines - thanks for pointing this out.