Thanks Rob, I appreciate your time and effort in your feedback.

I found that most of my wobbly-lines came from my pen edge whereby I was holding the pen at too sharp and angle to the paper (usually draw in pencil), and/or the pen tip itself gradually turned into quite an unpleasant thing to draw with - pressing to hard? rough paper? cheap pen?

Also I found my lines became more wobbly when I had done shoulder exercises haha!

I'll crack on with redoing those two aspects of Lesson 1. I'd actually done the rotated boxes before I considered signing up for critiques as I was going to go through the lessons without support. Yet, here I am and thought it would be wise to have support.

Thanks again Rob,

Look forward to catching up in two weeks time.