Maxtible

Thank you for the critique, I feel like I am still wrestling with how to apply line weight appropriately (you brought this up in the critique of lesson 3 as well). This time round I think I was trying to emphasize parts of the drawing using line weight as well as overlaps but just ended up getting carried away too much. Also I felt like I struggled a bit wrapping the added forms round the sausage armature legs even after studying the example images. I just couldn't see it in my head how to construct/wrap them around effectively.

Still, I'm looking forward to Lesson 5 so onward we go!

Thanks for the critique! I understand your points about my line weight and will try to judge the use of it more thoughtfully as I go into lesson 4. Looking forward to the next steps!

Thanks for the critique Tofu, lots of points for me to digest going forward. I think I bit off more than I could chew with some of the textures in the dissections. I struggled to draw what I was seeing using mostly cast shadows so ended up just drawing outlines. It's one of the many things for me to practice as I progress through the course!

Thanks for the feedback! I can't believe I missed the 5 - 6 boxes per page guideline in the lesson text, sorry about that!

I do try to submit my homework as ordered and neatly as I can so I'm annoyed with myself for presenting pages stuffed with too many boxes!!