7:44 PM, Tuesday March 21st 2023
Hi again! All right, the rest look fabulous, and your plan sounds solid. Good luck with lesson 2!
Also, if you haven't tried it, the drawabox discord channel has a critique exchange, where you do 5 critiques and then your submission is added to a spreadsheet that gets critiqued faster. (Sometimes lessons are critiques fast, and sometimes posts languish for a year without a critique.)
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Good luck with lesson 2!