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1:45 PM, Sunday August 27th 2023
Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight
i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.
1.Superimposed Lines
Although your line are fraying on both ends ,I can see that you are trying to do it in the 1st although it is not perfect I can say it is good with enough practice you can master it.
Your lines are confident great job.
2.Ghosted Lines
Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod. Just be mindfull that you kinda bend some of the lines.
3.Ghosted Planes
It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.
Some of the lines are woobly just be mindful on that.
Your execution are Awesome
4.Tables of Ellipses
Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful. Although the circle are not accurate just keep practicing and you will master it.
5.Ellipses in Planes
Same as tables of ellipeses.
just be mindful on undershooting on circle. overshooting is better than undershooting those circle to establish confident circles. but overall did great
6.Funnels
Great work snuggling the circle just be mindfull your circle are still wobble.
Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.
A few undershooting again just be mindful on that so next time you do it you won't do the same mistake.
7.Plotted Perspective
Great work on this.
I like you have overlap boxes, you could add a line weight to show which box is closer.
8.Rough Perspective
great improvment on the lines.
You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines And plotting the front of the boxes
I suggest that you should add line weight in the front of the boxes and not the inner or back to convey to the viever that it is closer
9.Rotated Boxes
It's so clean i like it.
The gaps are consistent
most of the boxes are pointing towards Vp
some of the boxes are not hitting the middle vp but you will have a lot opportunity on fixing this on 250 box just be mindfull on that.
A few wobbles but it's still good
You really did great Job on this thing.
10.Organic Perspective
Your lines here are confident,
You did great making small boxes as they are far.
Some of the lines in the boxes are vanishing towards the vanishing point great job.
Most of it are parallel to each other.
I can see that you are trying to fix Some face of the box but if you made a mistake just be it and be mindful of it nexttime
This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.
Congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall
JOIN DISCORD SO PEOPLE CAN CRIT YOUR BOXES FROM TIME TO TIME WHEN DOING THE 250 BOXES
Next Steps:
CONGRATUtion you are READY TO TAKE 250 BOXES CHALLENGE NO RUSH.
REMEMBER DO WARM UPS(LINES OR CIRCLES)
AND DO 50% RULE
3:13 PM, Sunday August 27th 2023
Thank you very much for your time.
It was very helpful and I will take all of those critics and advices into account.
Have a good day.
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