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5:02 AM, Saturday January 2nd 2021
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9:24 AM, Saturday January 2nd 2021

thank you, i suppose my guesses for the parallel lines are just way off and demand more practice

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5:16 AM, Saturday January 2nd 2021

Hey Blippy,

I think the issue with the organix perspective exercise for you is that you didn't converge your parallel lines. That's how the Y affects the box. The way you've drawn a lot of them, they look isometric, as if they're not seen in 3d perspective.

Also I think you could swork on your confidence / smoothness with your lines and ellipses.

Otherwise I think things look good! Hope that helped!

Next Steps:

Move on to the 250 box challenge; Uncomfortable explains convergence there. Good luck!

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