5:56 AM, Thursday March 5th 2020
Hiya! I’ll be looking through this~
The lines look good, though there’s a bit too much focus on accuracy (particularly obvious in your arcing superimposed lines.) Remember that confidence is to be prioritized, not accuracy. A confident, but inaccurate line is still correct. An accurate, but wobbly line is not. By the way, for the planes, I recommend using start/end points for your non-diagonal center lines, too.
This is particularly an issue in your ellipses. They’re too stiff, and wobbly, and make more of an effort to hit all of the bounds of the frame, than to be smooth, and rounded. Be careful that you’re going around them 2 full times, by the way, and no more than 3. Though you’ve understood the technical aspects of these exercises, the lack of confidence is a bit of a deal breaker, so I’ll quickly request an extra page of ellipses (of an exercise of your choice), before marking this as complete. Be especially careful that they’re confident. It’s perfectly fine for them to miss the frame, even if by a lot.
The box section looks really good! It looks like you used a ruler for the front faces of the boxes in the rough perspective exercise. This is incorrect, but not a huge deal. What is a huge deal is the automatic reinforcing. If a line is wrong, it’s wrong. Rather than make it scream its presence by correcting it, simply leave it, and spend more time ghosting the next one.
Though there’s a few issues, this is solid work, and I’ll be happy to mark it as complete just as soon as I see those ellipses. GL!
Next Steps:
1 page of ellipses