12:22 AM, Sunday April 16th 2023
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback!
Appreciate you noting me going over lines again, I believe it may be partly down to the texture of the sketchbook not being the best for the fineliner as you mentioned resulting in some fainter lines than I'd like. On top of making sure I hold the pen more perpendicular to ensure a thick initial line I'll move over to using simple printer paper from now on. I'll also focus on your notes regarding adding lineweight.
The notes on ellipses in funnels is also very helpful and gives me something to focus on when using the ellipse exercises as warmups.
Many thanks again!