Hello

Good job completing lesson two

Great job on the arrows, you've drawn them with confidence.

One thing you can do to improve them would be to change their size some more as they go into and out of the page. You have done this a little bit with some of your arrows but it would be a good idea to experiment with some more dramatic changes in depth.

Another thing I would like to mention is make use of all the space on the page, dont be afraid to have your arrows crossing over each other more. this will allow you to be more free with how you draw your arrows instead of constricting them with the space you have remaining.

also remember you can add little lineweight to one of the lines on where the arrow folds of itself to give it a little bit more form.

the final thing I would like to say is to make sure that every line is drawn using the ghosting method including the on the hatching.

For your organic forms, all I can say is great job, theres not much feedback I can give here other than for your organic froms with elipses you are changing the degrees throughout the elipse but I dont think you are doing it as much on organic shapes with contours.

Great job with the textures too, all your marks have purpose. I think when transitioning from light to dark you can probably try make the transition a bit more smooth. at the moment it feels like theres line in the middle where it makes a drastic change.

The textures on your Dissections look great too, they wrap around the forms and break the silihoutte when they need to. there doesnt seem to be random marks either.

Your intersections looks great too, each line drawn with confidence. everything looks like its intersecting with each other properly aswell. one piece of advice I could give here is to add a bit of lineweight to the parts of the shapes where they intersect. You could also add a small elipse to your spheres to give them a bit of form.as shown here

Finally your organic intersections, I think you could make use of the page more. there is a lot of spaces around the edges. on your first page there is also a seperate group of two sausages that seem seperate from the rest and detract from overall composition of the drawing. Your contours also seems to lack alot of confidence here although they do improve on the second page. I think you did a decent job with the shadows.

I think its fine for you to move on to the next lesson, since you shown that you understand the purpose of these lessons, and you will improve with things over time.